Film trailer Low Level 2. This needs work to reach your desired standard. There are some good shots and the music works in parts. Consider changing the track when you reveal the problem (no man). The titles could be more prominent. Ultimately this needs more shots and indication of the storyline. Your editing needs to be a lot tighter to create a quicker pace. More shots on the prospective men is vital - who will she end up with?! The classified ads are very seedy - you should refilm these and use a more upmarket newspaper!
Film poster = High Level 1 - decent tag line and image, but not enough film information e.g. director, institution, certificate. You need to look back at your research of film posters. Outline of man could be improved.
Magazine cover = Level 2 applies conventions reasonably well, but you shouldn't use the same image for both your poster and magazine. You should actually mention the name of your film!
Anything in bold has been added to my to do list :) X
Monday, 21 December 2009
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