Rather that focussing on Amy, being the bride at this moment i want to focus on Jess (stage name mirander) Jess is the owner of the wedding shop. She has big curly hair, and dresses casually but creativly, with a jumper thrown around her shoulders, jeans and trainers. When she enters the shot we first see her say "emma" and almost float aross the room to give emma and air kiss and a hug. Which shows how she cares for emma they obviously have some sort of relationship that may have been formed earlier in the film. She also seems quite staged, a common trait in these "arty" people.
In the film Love actually Mark is represented as quiet an arty, creativie character. But he isnt massivly ike jess because he is more down to earth. this is a picture from in the film that shows his creativeness. This is how i would like to potray jess, as a loving person. She is also very similar to Caroline Goodall in the princess diaries...
Film trailer Low Level 2. This needs work to reach your desired standard. There are some good shots and the music works in parts. Consider changing the track when you reveal the problem (no man). The titles could be more prominent. Ultimately this needs more shots and indication of the storyline. Your editing needs to be a lot tighter to create a quicker pace. More shots on the prospective men is vital - who will she end up with?! The classified ads are very seedy - you should refilm these and use a more upmarket newspaper!
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